JU Haiku Challenge

A few haikus

Published on June 10, 2007 By Jythier In Poetry

Boredom:

I've done many things
I stare blankly into space
What should I do now?

Political:

What have you done, sir?
The mission was completed.
Why can't they come home?

Ego:

A thousand women
Line up at my door each night
They can't all be wrong.

Comments

SanChonino

on Jun 10, 2007

I liked the ego one best

amandapearl2

on Jun 10, 2007

me too.

Jythier

on Jun 10, 2007

Thanks, glad to hear the word 'liked' instead of 'least hated'.

InBloom

on Jun 10, 2007

The last one is my fave, too.

uDigItTheMost

on Jun 10, 2007

The last one is my fave, too.

And my fave as well. Sounds like something I would've wrote.

dynamaso

on Jun 11, 2007

I like the punchline of the third but prefer the sentiment of the second.

Jythier

on Jun 11, 2007

Much better at punchlines than sentiment, though.

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